Talented Thursdays: Invitation by Evelyn Rivera
Updated: Aug 1, 2019

INVITATION
You see how slavery is more organized ? And game is more strategic to epitomize the social life of my God given right to birth, and be wives. But see, you need an INVITE to insult me you need an invite to impress me You need an invite to belittle me You need an invite to define me Because regardless of what you say or what you think, that freedom to take over and shrink me mentally won’t have a pint of my ink Because you need an invite to click my link. I am definitely on the brink. You cannot affect me unless you have an invitation. Exercising the first amendment is swell But do not step to me w your misogyny thinking you know me well, it’s thinning your cerebellum Just because I have a vagina, shouldn’t that be a reminder that you have a mother, shouldn’t you love her? This is all a reflection of you. You invited yourself to play yourself and repress your truth. You can kill us but we heal us. Carry the world on our backs We all know you secretly wish you were black
Keep up.
See what I’m saying is that this ain’t your party. You will never be invited to delicacy. Excellent minorities who are the majority, ruling and permanently imprinted in time Game fair. You can kill us but we’ll never be scared. Who is really here ? Who do you really fear? we invited you to peace We invited you to harmony But you burned the invitation w Trayvon Threw salt on Mike Brown Can you even say their names, where are they now? Putting our hearts up in smoke Killing our soul as soon as Eric Garner was choked Funny you can provoke, when provoke is a crime, history and time deaths invitation with inconsistent selection Slow down.
See, You need an invite to see me. You probably think that I am angry .. because I’m a woman with an opinion, typical. Well let me invite you to my world, reciprocal.
Keep up.

Evelyn Rivera goes by the pen name Erogenous Storm. She is 26 years old and from Brooklyn, NY. Evelyn has been writing since 5th grade. Life was so rough as an adopted child. As a result, the young poet used writing and dancing as an escape. She started dancing at the age of four and has been gracing the stage ever since.Although dance is her first love, she uses writing to express, release and share personal experiences in hopes of saving and restoring hope amongst all ages. In Evelyn’s words, “It is my strength, poetry is power.”Becoming a mother has caused her on an endless journey towards her betterment, which can be seen in her work. The theme of her poetry blog isare “words are like little gods ” and her movement is called “believe.affirm.receive.”
Follow Evelyn “Erogenous Storm” Rivera
Twitter: @Erogenous_Storm
Blog: Evelyn’s Poetry
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Such an inspiring and evocative piece of writing by Evelyn. For anyone who appreciates indie creative works and interactive projects, check out Roaring Knight Fight which showcases impressive independent development.
This is a powerful and emotionally charged piece about identity, self-expression, boundaries, and refusing to let other people define who you are. I especially liked the recurring idea of an “invitation,” because it becomes a strong metaphor for deciding who gets access to your thoughts, experiences, and personal world. The poem also connects personal strength with broader experiences of discrimination and resilience, giving the writing a deeper social dimension. Evelyn Rivera’s background makes the piece even more meaningful, particularly her use of writing as a way to express personal experiences and encourage hope. That connection between identity and expression is fascinating because a thoughtful perfume brand can also use creativity and storytelling to help people express individuality in their own way.
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